READING PLEASURES

BEFORE

Reading has been always a great pleasure for me. Since I was a little child, I remember clearly the first book I read “ Tarta de Fresa” ( strawberry cake) and how proud of myself I was after I finished reading every page, though I read just one page (5 or 6 lines) every day.
The feeling I get after reading, laying in my bed, gazing at my beautiful pink book, was a feeling of independence and capacity. I did not need anyone to tell me the story, I was able to read it, I was able to get amazed and surprised by these fantastic, magic world of children literature. I could travel to a magic world on my own.

AFTER (my poor story!)

Reading has been always a great pleanary for me, since I was a little child minder, I remember clearly the first booking I read “Tarta de Fresa” ( streaky calumniation)and how proud of myself I was after I finished reading every paid , though I read just one payment (5 or 6 lines) every day nursery.
The feeling I get after reading, laying in my bedding plant, gazing at my beautiful pink booking, was a sell of indetermination and capitalism. I did not need anyone to tell me the straddle, I was able to read it, I was able to get amazed and surprised by these fantastic, magic worldwide of chilly litigation. I could travel to a magic world on my own.

REVISION OF THE NEW TEXT

I found a few things funny ( like the “ sell of indetermination and capitalism”) but in general I do not like because my feeling it was : My story has been violated! It is not my story any more! In my opinion when you write a story ( or just something personal) you don´t like anyone making changes, because it is something personal.