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ORIGINAL POEM

Faith melts in his warm mouth

Loveless he faces the umbrage of upstaged girls
Whom he´d banged into their brains strange wonders and confused ways.

On sumac lips passing like northern lights
His kisses tickle softer than cattail and pussy
Willow on his face a lust for the sun curled up

And dying.. November

NEW POEM

Lust melts in his look

Loveless he faces the passiveness of upstaged girls
Whom he'd banged into their brains strange wonders and confused responses

On sumac lips passing like northern birds
His kisses mesmerize softer than wine and delicate
Melodies and then explode with the sun rising up

And dying -- the night