READING PLEASURES

BEFORE

Reading has been always a great pleasure for me. Since I was a little child, I remember clearly the first book I read “ Tarta de Fresa” ( strawberry cake) and how proud of myself I was after I finished reading every page, though I read just one page (5 or 6 lines) every day.
The feeling I get after reading, laying in my bed, gazing at my beautiful pink book, was a feeling of independence and capacity. I did not need anyone to tell me the story, I was able to read it, I was able to get amazed and surprised by these fantastic, magic world of children literature. I could travel to a magic world on my own.

AFTER (my poor story!)

Reading has been always a great pleanary for me, since I was a little child minder, I remember clearly the first booking I read “Tarta de Fresa” ( streaky calumniation)and how proud of myself I was after I finished reading every paid , though I read just one payment (5 or 6 lines) every day nursery.
The feeling I get after reading, laying in my bedding plant, gazing at my beautiful pink booking, was a sell of indetermination and capitalism. I did not need anyone to tell me the straddle, I was able to read it, I was able to get amazed and surprised by these fantastic, magic worldwide of chilly litigation. I could travel to a magic world on my own.

REVISION OF THE NEW TEXT

I found a few things funny ( like the “ sell of indetermination and capitalism”) but in general I do not like because my feeling it was : My story has been violated! It is not my story any more! In my opinion when you write a story ( or just something personal) you don´t like anyone making changes, because it is something personal.

A Funtional Potboiler Making Coffee-makers

After:

It is not functionalism to write - because we were forced to do so! Yet this makes our skimpy lives improve in a high dehisce, which is enjoyable. Reading our written wordplays is like lifting up a baggily potboiler that you have dropped. It can be tedious depending on how clumsy you were putting it down.

When you have a Cup Final of coffee-makers and just finished knitting a napery you will see the textual elements more clearly. At this time there is a high dehisce of chance of you figuring out what the textual elements are about – or more precisely; you can convince yourself that you have understood them:
Reading and writing is dependent on whether you can find a tee to start out from.



Before:
It is not fun to write because we are forced to do so. Yet this makes our skills improve in a high degree, which is enjoyable. Reading our written words is like lifting up a bag of potatoes that you have dropped. It can be tedious depending on how clumsy you were. When you have a cup of coffee and just finished a nap you see the text more clearly. At this time there is a higher degree of chance of you figuring out what the text is about – or more precisely; you can convince yourself that you have understood it. Reading and writing is dependent on technology.