tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4613111077058309449.post4093388670082954027..comments2023-06-14T15:02:47.881+02:00Comments on Creative Writing AAU English Fall 2009: Benthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4613111077058309449.post-31277565158600904512009-10-20T22:13:57.570+02:002009-10-20T22:13:57.570+02:00Nice story, although not exactly travel writing, b...Nice story, although not exactly travel writing, but more of a story of friendship... Most of the indredients are OK integrated, even the birds are better than in most of the pieces I've seen. Still, some of them are dumped on the reader's head as lists, which is not natural at all...Benthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4613111077058309449.post-58598911252192580792009-10-20T22:08:12.541+02:002009-10-20T22:08:12.541+02:00this is by Marta and Lilli:)this is by Marta and Lilli:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com